A few days ago, I applied to the starting point for signing a contract. The starting point refused very politely. They told me to come back after 200,000 words … Orz … But Ogawa knew that even if the teenager wanted to sign a contract with 200,000 words, it would be run.
The whole first chapter, Nanchuan in midsummer, is actually to describe each member of the basketball team more or less. As I said in the preface, I don’t want everyone to remember the name of one or two people because each of them is unique.
When I was a teenager, I remember a friend asked me who the protagonist was, but I didn’t give a definite answer, because in my opinion, this basketball team, which will be composed of ten people, is the real protagonist of the teenager, and this novel story is also around this team.
After reading the first chapter, you should find that the plot has been unfolded and a lot of foreshadowing has been buried. How to say this? The first chapter has 130,000 words, which is beyond my original expectation. In the framework I have built, there are ten chapters for teenagers. I originally expected 190,000 words. According to the current situation, it will be about 1.2 million. This figure makes Ogawa, who has never written a 150,000-word novel, feel a little numb, but Ogawa will stick to it. If there is no way to get Jiang Lang to do it in the end, I will also slightly
Just now, I saw a friend in the comment area who said Ogawa’s writing was too procrastinating. He looked upset, and then I reread the whole first chapter. In fact, many things that were procrastinating in the past were paved with plot aspects, which will be revealed one by one. But I think if you really look upset, click on the right corner to cross it out. Don’t force yourself to read it.
Last night, I sat in front of my brain for a long time, and the plot got stuck for more than an hour, and I believe this will be the first time Ogawa needs to break through the bottleneck to finish the whole teenager, because the feeling of finishing a novel of hundreds of thousands or millions is far from writing a novel of hundreds of thousands … Many great gods say that code words are a very lonely thing, and now Ogawa has a deep understanding. I often sit in front of my brain at four o’clock and squeeze out a little paper, which is almost very depressing.
Ok, it’s just Ogawa’s nonsense. There’s no hope of signing the contract. I hope everyone can vote for me if they think it’s ok. Those great gods don’t lack your votes, but for Ogawa, this is my motivation to stick to it
Section 46 will be updated later today, so I’ll stop here and code words. Bye-bye.
Section 46 ChuChen hope heart (a)
"Chen Xi came out to help collect the money." Chu Chen Xi was stringing shrimp balls together one by one, and outside came big JIU Yong-kang Wang. Chu Chen Xi let go of the basket and went to the pool to wash his hands. This was the unhurried sliding door and went out.
"That girl over there is four and a half dollars in total." Big JIU pointed to one side of the seat. He put all kinds of ingredients into the soup to see if it tastes good or not.
"Oh," Chuchen Shimmer said, as soon as he got to the girl, he picked up the five-yuan note, threw it at the cashier’s desk, and then opened the drawer and took out a fifty-cent coin and handed it to the girl.
"You are Chu Chenxi, Class 14, Senior High School, right?" Chuchen and just ready to turn away from the girl suddenly asked.
"Yes, are you also in No.7 Middle School?" Chuchen and no expression way
"Well," the girl nodded, "I was in Class One, Grade One, and I came here once on Thursday. I saw your game the day before yesterday, but I didn’t recognize it. I just remembered that you played well!"
Chu Chenxi looked up and looked at the girl’s mind. What day did she see it, but she couldn’t remember.
"Thank you, but I still lost." He didn’t shy away from the fact that he lost in the end.
"But the second year of high school will be older. We almost won at the end of one year. Your last performance was wonderful!" The girl’s tone also seems a little sorry.
"It’s a pity that I lost." Chu Chenxi said simply that the difference between senior one and senior two can also be regarded as a consolation. That can’t be used as a reason for failure. This time, I really lost, and I can’t blame others or bad luck. If it is bad luck, I will chase the 16-point gap by myself.
"If you fight one-on-one, you may not lose." The girl went on with some adamant4.
"That’s not necessarily." Chu Chenxi once again downplayed the girl’s words and flashed in her mind. In the end, the deadly fast break from Ji Hantian’s starting speed can be seen that his explosive power should not be weaker than himself. It was only when he dunked with his tomahawk that he realized that he still underestimated him. From yesterday’s performance, it seems that he should be 50-50, but he has outstanding ball consciousness but he has no former coach’s evaluation of himself. It seems that he still has such a good personal skill and no team concept.
Chuchen wants to think of the men on the school team and Wei Ning and Ji Hantian. These people are probably their own teammates. They are all dismissive except Yin Yunhe and Ji Hantian.
"How can there be people like you who degrade themselves?" The girl finally gave up arguing with Chu Chenxi.
"I’m not demeaning myself." Chu Chenxi’s tone is a little lazy. "I don’t like to lose, but I have to find all kinds of excuses. Losing is whether I care about winning or losing. That’s another matter."
"So you mean you don’t care about winning or losing?" The girl caught ChuChen words way
"I didn’t say that." Chu Chenxi’s eyes doubled. "Of course I want to win, but then I have to have the chance to do my best or lose. There is nothing to regret. You can see that I tried my best or lost. What can I do?"
The girl is poor in real words this time. I didn’t expect Chu Chenxi to speak the same truth.
"I have work to do." Seeing girls has nothing to say. Chuchen wants to turn around and go.
"Well, do you work here?" The girl also don’t know what to say should be casually asked.
Chu Chenxi stopped and turned around. "It’s not that the store at home came to help. It’s nothing, is it?"
"Er, my name is Lin Yuxin … it’s nothing."
"Lin Yuxin? Well, I remember, "ChuChen said casually, and I don’t know if it’s really remembered or perfunctory.
Yong-kang wang looked at ChuChen hope a little nai this child this treat people more and more cold …
As soon as Chu Chenxi entered the compartment pocket, the mobile phone vibrated.
He took out his mobile phone and looked at it. It seemed that the string of numbers did not move, and his face suddenly became callous. It took him more than ten seconds to press the answer key and put the mobile phone to his ear.
"hello"
Here comes the girl’s soft voice "Chen Xi?"
"Well" ChuChen seems to don’t want to talk.
"What was the result of the game?" There stopped for a few seconds and probably didn’t know what to say.
"Lost" he should be a blunt.
"Is that … afternoon?" Listen to the ChuChen and blunt tone there was silence for a turn the topic asked.
Chu Chenxi thought for a moment and wanted to answer "No" before he spoke again. "I know you will say" No "… but today I finally have a chance to come out and hang out with me, isn’t it?"
Chuchen took a long breath and the tone was a little soft "OK"
There suddenly became a little excited "you agreed? ! Then go to the pedestrian street over the rainbow department store at two o’clock in the afternoon. "
……
Chuchen hung up and suddenly felt a strong feeling in his heart. This feeling is even more fierce than watching Ji Hantian’s points widen in the game two days ago … What should I do?
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"A medium potato, a cheeseburger, two medium cokes and a pineapple pie" Nanchuan Pedestrian Street over the rainbow Department Store McDonald’s Righi looked at the dazzling list in front of the counter in cold weather.
"That’s it? We have the latest set meal here to … "The clerk put on a professional smile and continued to introduce other kinds of food in the cold weather.
"No, that’s enough," said Ji Hantian, interrupting her.
The expression on the face of the staff hasn’t changed at all. It’s still a standard smile. "Can I have a pineapple party in one medium potato, one cheeseburger and two cups?" A total of yuan "
Ji Hantian took a piece of one hundred from his pocket and handed it to her.
"Take your one hundred change … please keep it."
JiHanTian carrying tray to a two-person seat next to the French window on the second floor, put the tray.
(Ogawa, the second chapter has been written. Let’s vote. I update it on time and expect your votes every day! )
Section 47 ChuChen hope heart (2)
"A lot of people lined up." He sat opposite Xia Jing, then picked up the coke and took a mouthful of cold drink to wet his dry throat.
"Well," Xia Jing also took a cup of coke and took a sip and looked out the window. "There are many people outside today."
The pedestrian street outside the window is bustling with people, because today is Sunday and the temperature has dropped, so many people have gone out to go shopping.
Ji Han took a few glances at Xia Jing while drinking a drink. Today, she wore light makeup, and her skin looked whiter and brighter. She took a hairpin at school every day, and her black hair was a little messy. There was a pink Mickey hairpin on her forehead, which put bangs aside, which was more quiet than her youthful vitality at school.
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